Up to the forth draft! I'm happy with how things are coming along. In this draft more attention is paid to the mother and her grief. I'm planning to do a bit of a run through with some actors in the next week to see how this writing will translate into actions and dialog. I want to keep pushing this so that I can really get to the heart of the characters. Another pet peeve of mine is cliche's, and there are a few that stand out. Even some of just the minor actions the characters take, it's something that will require more thought from me.
Download the forth draft here!
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